this made me throwup from laughter, literally, im cleaning it off the floor write now.
funny vid made me laugh but oblivion is one of the best video games ive ever played.
my song Darkness
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Really like the drop basses. the overall production sounds pretty empty though and some elements interfere with eachother. for the drop i would make the 8 bit lead super wide with a haas effect. you could fill up your mix more with hats and reverb.
I feel that some eqing is a forshure. the track is super ambient and relaxing which i like. i would advise to get a better snare sample and a better reverse cymbal and crash. maybe put some subtle reverb on all three. it also sounds like your kick i clipping around the rest of the mix. maybe lower the volume and add sidechain compression for more impact.
I thought That the overall chord progression was good. i just thought that it could be took alot further in terms of arangement and compostition. also, drop wasn't matching in key. some time spent learning a scale might help. also make sure your master track is under 0 db, otherwise, you'll clip. if you want a good volume level, mix the drums at -10 db and then set everything around it, as the drums are usually the highest volume in edm. i also suggest working on sample choice for the drums as they come out very weak and flat. if your drums arent loud enough, some subtle sidechain compression can work wonders.
Yeah well the drums are not supposed to be powerfull, it's trap, not dubstep (there's no Trap category on NG :/ )
Thanks for the review anyway :)
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